the monkey and the laptop
My friend said his new monkey can do what ever he does. As soon as we nervously put a laptop for him to use I said
"this is a bad idea."I sternly, said to I know he would push the laptop off but to be honest there was a software update. He could got mad over that. I know now not to ever trust that monkey ever ever again. Well he is just a monkey I'm not sure but I don't think that jeff knows how to train but in mean time I need to get a new laptop.
I get the gist of your story but your sentences do not flow very well. Be sure to read it out loud as this will help see where to fix your writing. (Some long run on sentences)
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