Wednesday 18 October 2017


                                                                  the lake
after school there was two kids I was in my blue pants and black boots. I was walking home the kids shoved me like a train was heading my way! I went flying into a wall that was geting worked on I went diving under debris I was trying too get out, a guy pushed the debris off me, I got home I had grass in my hair I looked like a monster.



I feel bad for pushing hem in I'll say sorry tomorrow.

"sorry"
"it's ok"

 I was walking home then I got pushed then...
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  1. Unknown19 October 2017 at 15:03

    You are missing some very important capitals. Parts of your story are very confusing. Read it out loud to your self and to someone. Work on making your story flow from beginning to end.

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